anonymous
2015-08-08 14:13:27 UTC
I understand intrinsically that the double negation begun in the nucleus of the subject changes the meaning of the first and third relative clauses, but in the second clause there is no additional negative, rendering me to consider it as a possible grammatical error with the following literal meaning: "No citizen shall be a representative."
Acknowledging only fools would adhere to that interpretation, I've tried reconsidering my interpretation to no avail. Either it is grammatically incorrect as is, or I'm ignorant of some grammatical rule long since neglected by grammar texts.
I've revised the sentence, changing a position of a comma, and added in parentheses cardinal numbers to indicate that the scope of "who shall not have" is applying to the next 2 immediate clauses, while the subject "no person" continues to apply for the remainder of the sentence.
No person shall be a representative who shall not have, (1) attained the age of 25 years, and (2) been 7 years a citizen of the United States, and who also shall not, when elected, be an inhabitant of that state in which he shall be chosen.