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There are so many important requirements to becoming president; such as previous political experience and education. Hillary Clinton has been in the political scene throughout life starting in college. Hillary Clinton's career began in college, where she became a spokesperson for children's rights, later she was elected Senator of New York, then becoming the first lady, demonstrating a responsible career in politics. Clinton has always been a supporter for all human rights. Motivating much movement around the world for women's equality, and bringing to light struggles that men and women face every day.
Against many politician’s advice Hillary chose a very interesting topic. Second of all education, Clinton attended Wellesley’s college. She became involved in social movements; she was a big activist for underprivileged children. Later attending Yale University, where she stood up for education and health for the poor. Hillary Clinton’s website says that she became a partner in a law firm, she was the first female associate. She would have not accomplished this if she did not have education on her side. Clinton has shown that she has completed all the steps to becoming our next president. There is many steps and requirements for becoming commander-in-chief, from the most important our prior political experience and education which Clinton suits the picture.

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this is the continuation of the paragraphs ... To be an amazing president you have to show it throughout your past, in public service and as a leader. To be President of the United States one must be in public service and want to serve the people equally. For example, in 1973 Donald Trump is sued by the Justice Department due to the unfair treatment towards African-American buyers. The agency set up an experiment, searching for women of different races all searching for housing and federal help. There were 2 ladies who asked if there was a rental available, they got totally different answers where the African-American women was rejected, and the Caucasian women was accepted. Trump has been on national television before when he has attacked many celebrities and middle class citizens. Clinton has been acting more mature and not developing anger in her campaign. In conclusion, voting for the next president should not be a hard task for many.

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There are so many important requirements to becoming president; KNOWLEDGE AND JUDGEMENT. Hillary Clinton has been in the political scene throughout life starting in college. Hillary Clinton's career began in college, where she became a spokesperson for children's rights, then becoming the first lady, **later she was elected Senator of New York**(SHE BECAME SENATOR AFTER FIRST LADY), demonstrating a responsible career in politics. Clinton has always been a supporter for all human rights. Motivating PEOPLE around the world for women's equality, and bringing to light struggles that men and women face every day.



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The idea of BALANCE is also relevant to one's ability to be Leader of the Free World, Commander-in-Chief of all our Armed Forces, Diplomat-in-Chief, Chess-Master-in-Chief, and President of the United States. Hillary Clinton's ability to multitask, balancing her dedication to public service with her duties as First Lady (of Arkansas, and of the United States), with her career as "one of the top 100 most influential attorneys in the United States" (Hillary was twice cited in the National Law Review) as the first woman law partner in the Rose Law Firm in Little Rock, and with her knowledge of corporate issues as she served on the Boards of Directors for an Arkansas children's hospital and for several large corporations, to include Walmart (where Hillary incurred the wrath of Sam Walton when she spoke out in favor of higher pay and maybe profit-sharing for the Walmart workers). To add to this concept of BALANCE, Hillary served as a two-term U.S. Senator for New York while remaining engaged in foreign policy and nationwide social issues.



The 25 years of vicious criminally partisan smear campaigns and slander against the power couple Clintons has helped Hillary strengthen within, revealing intestinal fortitude and an incredible ability to withstand and even transcend outrageous injustice without once responding in kind or holding a grudge that will serve our next President (and the American people) quite well.

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